Really great stuff guys. I'm too f-ing booked to try more revisions today. I am more of a programmer than I am a graphic designer though I've been schooled by some amazing cats.
What you all should be paying attention to (so I have learned from being scolded by print-masters) are these detais:
Font: there should pretty much NEVER be more than 3 fonts on an ad. Usually just Logo font and text. Adding more would only add mental confusion. This one kicks ASS in that front.
Horizontal Planes: Creating balance and flow so there is enough space to take in the primary message without distraction.
This one kicks ass on all those fronts. But not particularly making me want to whip out 5-600 bucks on a impulse, which is the purpose of a presale add:
This one is balanced and a little more mysterious which is good:
Whereas on the other spectrum, this one is pure inspiration, it makes me ready to drop money:
Too many fonts, I would ace the top left wording for sure. Love that it's 8bit on the smoke, its some underground funky shit.
If I finish my contracts today, Ill try again, but you guys kick ass.