Win a Free Ascent by DaVinci- Haiku Contest!

[Tweek]

I lay awake see
the stars pinpoints through the veil
I warm my ascent

with ascent in hand
I venture through the pine veil
seeking solituide

 

[Buyola]

Vaporfreshing and cool
Ascent is a sweet summer rain
That washes the brain

 

[SmokeyJihad]

All glass vapor path
Savor the flavor to go
Taste buds will ascent

 

[Anonymouse]

The haiku format
is a single, succinct poem;
There are no stanzas.

(It's an exercise in brevity.)

 

[1_gr8_underdog]

Uncompromising
justifiably cautious
overprotective

New members eager
never read entire thread
My head is splitting

best feature I find
any others clumsy like me
replaceable glass

 

[green2brown]

The haiku format
is a single, succinct poem;
There are no stanzas.

(It's an exercise in brevity.)

Haiku's can be linked
To tell a greater story
Search "haiku trio"

A true haiku though
Is seventeen on, yet our
English one's are not.

Syllables, you see,
Can vary in length, while on
Are always the same.

 

[marduk]

DaVinci Ascent
Will be Fucking Combustion
Until kingdom come

 

[green2brown]

I make love OK,
But what really gets the girls
Is my black Ascent.

 

[Vitolo]

In this world of all
things Vapor, to my friends I
present this Haiku~

 

[Deadshort480]

I just can't hear it
They say I have an Ascent
Just like DaVinci

 

[Red_Eyed_Ninja]

the Ascent begins
milking flowers gently now
frosted breath escapes

 

[Anonymouse]

Haiku's can be linked
To tell a greater story
Search "haiku trio"

A true haiku though
Is seventeen on, yet our
English one's are not.

Syllables, you see,
Can vary in length, while on
Are always the same.

Demo kono bai,
Eigo de kaku kara;
Shou ga nai deshou?

 

[lwien]

^^ Now THAT'S fucking Haiku.

Actually, it's kinda fucking Haiku, 'cause if it was REALLY fucking Haiku, it would be written in Japanese characters, but then, how in the fuck would we know how many syllables there are? I mean, I KNOW I'm not the only one that counts syllables when reading some of these, right?

(takes tiny sip of scotch and fires up lsv...)

 

[V8pire]

DaVinci Ascent
the most advanced portable
preorder yours now

all glass vapor path
botaniclals and oils
lifestyle designs

DaVinci is back
the Ascent will reign supreme
bow before the king

glass on glass vapor
oil or herb its your choice
set temp and sit back

I love the ascent
davinci brings the vapor
now im in space

three colors to choose
stealth burl wood or croc skin
lifestyle designs

yes fuck combustion
ascent will free you from smoke
taste what you have missed

place lips upon you
suck what is inside of you
taste you inside me

turn on the ascent
set the right temperature
now breathe in breathe out

the ascent is here
time to get rid of my pax
i have a new friend

davinci ascent
hello my vapor maker
please come home with me

my dearest ascent
i want to turn you on now
long i have waited

enough is enough
now choose me for the ascent
i cant afford one

the future of vapes
davinci ascent is here
time to taste heaven

 

[green2brown]

Demo kono bai,
Eigo de kaku kara;
Shou ga nai deshou?

Yup. Yup. That's what I was saying?

 

[Anonymouse]

Yup. Yup. That's what I was saying?

Yeah, I don't see what the lack of direct translatability of the measure of counting "beats" to English has to do with writing epic haiku ballads, though. We can't count them the same way in English, but we can still follow all the other aspects of the form. There's been a lot of examples a lot closer to renga poetry than haiku.

Well, technically they should also contain a seasonal reference, but I see no problem with dumping that as it's pretty damn hard to shoehorn into a poem about a vapouriser, however the cut and the formal structure are easy enough to adopt. To strictly follow the form, they should be concise, and contain a break and juxtaposition between the first and last two, or first two and last, lines.

Like this example,
I could write anything here;
but this bit contrasts.

That's why they have haiku "masters". Doing it properly is supposed to be difficult, and require thought and effort.

 

[SwiftGeneration]

through the clouds i see
da vinci compliment me
with his newfound friend

they make a great team
dear ascent and da vinci
they tag team my lungs

sleep is my prison
wake and vape is my escape
ascend to find grace

four hour long ride
ascents glass lips by my side
she never stays home

 

[Anonymouse]

Okay I give up;
Peeps just want to post entries,
but not read the thread.

 

[Reflections]

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whining and pineing
anticipating ascent
when will u be mine

I want my Ascent!
expelling clouds of vapor
An Afternoon past

Da Vinci comes through
amazing us once again
proudly the ascent


The Ascent is here
cumulus clouds of vapor
sleek and portable

Astonishingly
Sleek and stealthy glass on glass
gong adaptable

A Brilliant Design
The Ascent by Da Vinci
Ultimate Vapor

Masterpiece unvieled
precise temperature control
portable ascent

 

[Deadshort480]

Quite a fun contest
Taken too seriously
Lighten up Francis

 

[Reflections]

flowers all blooming
green ones for the new Ascent
a mind blowing taste

 

[VaporsVaporizer]

Turn my Ascent on
Silken vapors flow through glass
This is Nirvana

 

[Samy]

With my DaVinci,
Constantly, flawless only
Can my Ascent be

 

[marduk]

The Ascent is what
all other vaporizers
really want to be

 

[Reflections]

lips upon the glass
green flowers with crystal tips
the splendid Ascent