Roast me please!

[Few Minute Programming]

Hi everyone!

I made a programming tutorial and I am aiming for teens around (12-16). That should be my target audience. I was hoping for someone to critique it and tell me how it could be improved. This is my first video in a while so I'm sure there will be lots to poke fun at.

Thanks!

 

[Tranquility]

What's your goal?

Why should they care? (How is your video series going to help the watcher with achieving their goal?)

Since I'm uncertain as to how much you want to get across in this "0" video, it's hard to even evaluate from a teaching/learning perspective.